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  1. Nov 17, 2007 11:33 AM #1
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    Thank you my dear friends

    I feel free everyday thanks to my friends
    I alway feel happy thanks to my friends
    I finally could see the sun thanks to my friends
    I have no more fear thanks to my friends

    I don't need to cry anymore thanks to my friends
    I need no more worry thanks to my friends
    I could finally find love thanks to my friends
    As I finally sprouted wings so

    Thank you my dear friends.

    _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

    This is for my friends so yah. It's simple but I don't care. It's for you all. ok. ^^
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    Re: Thank you my dear friends

    aww... thats so sweet of you.. ^^ a cute poem there..

    Hmm lets see... Too many repeating of the same words... i suggest you try to lessen the repeating...and make it into a chorus like in songs when you want to repeat...

    Descriptions would make the poem wonderful... try and tell us more of what your friends did to you in the poem...(methaphores are nice and hidden way of telling things are nice too...) decribe more.... and thus it'll be more complete..

    a nice way to end the poem... ^^ keep it up.. ^^
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    Re: Thank you my dear friends

    awww^^ i feel honored..*tear, tear* i told my self i wasnt gonna cry lol^^
    u did a great job
    kinda repetitive with the "thanks to my friends" but not that big of a deal i think so kudos to you^^
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