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    Thanks to Jenn

    The dawn has come,
    But i can't see the sun,
    your eyes stare at me,
    They penetrate me,
    All you wanted from the start,
    Was to take mt heart,
    drain it slow,
    and throw it out the window.
    I realized the heat,
    of your intentions from beneith,
    of you plans to suffocate me,
    But i don't blame you,
    If i were you i'd do the same,
    come at me wide open,
    and end this silly game,
    Ride the bullet,
    from the gun that assassinated me,
    give me dreams,
    give me hopes,
    and fascinate me,
    cut me wide open,
    so i can say,
    Sorry i guess i caused this mess,
    and sorry that my blood soaks your dress.
    Choose your next victim,
    Suck the life from his veins,
    and them release him from his chains,
    I was most fortunate,
    to survive your attack,
    Tell me how,
    show me now,
    make believe you're never coming back.
    Ride the bullet from the gun that assassinated me,
    Give me dreams,
    give me hopes,
    and fascinate me.
    Cut me wide open,
    so i can say,
    Sorry i guess i caused this mess,
    and sorry that my blood soaks your dress.

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    Re: Thanks to Jenn

    hmmm

    impressive but I heard better but it is good

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    Re: Thanks to Jenn

    not bad at all, this poem is really kool, i like the way is written it catches the reader's attention. keep it up man.

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    Re: Thanks to Jenn

    Peacock! Ah-ha...I was wandering through your profile and saw this same song you showed me in email but darn, it automatically erased it! Anyways, good song..again. lol keep it up Mr. Peacock! =D

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    Re: Thanks to Jenn

    Kewl poem......mmmmmmm Blood......
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: Thanks to Jenn

    Awesome Vincent! Keep up the great work.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Thanks to Jenn

    i love how you laid the guilt at her door steps
    blamming her for your pain and the mistrust
    you have very intentional and hurtfull i like this
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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