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Reply With QuoteThat was a good poem, it shows how much thanksgiving means. ^_^ I don't see anything wrong with this poem, you did a great job. Happy Thanksgiving everybody.
Family and friend's gather for smiles
as the smell of tradition and candle's
fill the air, clattering of plates the bumping
of glasses as the remnants of good cheer
finally appear.
The turkey still cooking ,the story's
still told nothing compares to the joy
of good laughs and a thankful heart
for a year that's half gone, people mingle
and chatter as the room feels with love.
Kids can be heard as the noise level
rises ,the telling of joke's that keep the
laughs going all night ,as the the sun goes
down and people go there own ways ,HAPPY
THANKS GIVING TO ALL ,AND TO EVERYONE
this poem is for all the people of AO and to all my
close friends enjoy the holiday .
HAVE A GREAT DAY.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
That was a good poem, it shows how much thanksgiving means. ^_^ I don't see anything wrong with this poem, you did a great job. Happy Thanksgiving everybody.
Thanks lifeforce! (:
Great job, Chris, I really liked it. You captured holidays perfectly and that's just about how it is. I liked this a lot because you managed to describe it great. Can't wait to read more!
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
That was a great poem. It was very festive and puts you right into the holiday spirit.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
Hey Bro! Sorry it's been awhile, but I've been caught up trying to write a poem like this! I guess great minds think alike, but I'm glad you posted this one because yours sounds a whole lot better Bro! I honestly don't see any problems! Awesome job Bro!
that a good poem tell just how the family get together and enjoy the hoilday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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