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    Thats It

    Thats it!
    I'm sick of it

    You make me so angry
    I can't see straight anymore

    You can always talk about someone else
    But what about you

    You have flaws
    Big ones might I add

    No one complains
    No one gets mad

    Sure I have faults to
    I won't say I don't
    I won't lie

    Everyone gets hurt
    Thats part of life

    So grow up
    And get over it

    The world hasn't ended because of one event
    View this as your new beginning

    Please take my advice
    And just move on

    Because if you don't
    Your life will end
    In one moment

    So thats it
    Thats all I have to say

    Take it to heart
    So you can learrn from this someday


    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Thats It

    wow the anger in this one is really cool and how you
    express your feeling for having enough of it is good as
    well i hope to read another like this from you
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Thats It

    lol...Grrrrr!!! this poem should be read by the idiots all around the world. lol. there is a very strong amount of emotion present.gj! lol.
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    Re: Thats It

    Oh wow the angry!!!! OW!!!! Thats so amazing hearing all this which is so cool about it! I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Thats It

    what you say ....thats it ...that was very nice one poem i like it ...many feeling mixing here ...but i love iit ...see more form you ...

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    Re: Thats It

    Whoa, a fast paced poem, for me.
    The two emotions - anger and caring for somebody are clearly seen. Nice job too!

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