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    Thaw.

    How could I forget?
    I haven't, and I probably,
    Never ever will.

    Though alone I felt,
    I knew you stood,
    Right next to me still.

    You may have lost,
    Your focus,
    It may have made me run.

    But it doesn't change the fact,
    That you were always,
    My one and only, my number 1.

    But the clouds in my sky,
    Are dark and black.
    And it's not at all what you diserve.

    I couldn't stand the thought,
    Of darkening up,
    Your beautiful blue skys.

    While specked with clouds,
    It's not overcast.
    There is happiness in your heart.

    And there is only,
    Coldness within mine.
    But maybe it will thaw in time.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Thaw.

    Sad like a break up! probly was! any who great job once again! I like your style even though it does vary! but keep it up!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Thaw.

    I like to change things upa bit. I don't like to do everything the same most of the time. I like different things a lot. So I feel good when I do a lotta different types of things. Strangely enough though it's not about a break up, it's about an old breakup and a good friend.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Thaw.

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    I like to change things upa bit. I don't like to do everything the same most of the time. I like different things a lot. So I feel good when I do a lotta different types of things. Strangely enough though it's not about a break up, it's about an old breakup and a good friend.
    And the most caring, sweet and understanding girl a man could ever know...

    I like your poem. It sucks to be in the places we're in, but I always know that I am here and will always love you.


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    Re: Thaw.

    I like it. Sad but such a beautiful poem. I really like some of your lines. Keep up the good work. ^^

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    Re: Thaw.

    Thank you thank you! Especially you Sprout, for being able to compliment even my personal to you work.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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