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    There's a broken heart when a friend leaves apart

    This a poem my best friend wrote to me because we're getting separated since we'll go to different colleges ... and since i liked it i decided to show it to everyone in AO :

    There's a reality which is killing me,
    On me it unleashed its bitterness and made me bad feel.
    Leaving me i became like a fallen leaf from a writhe tree.
    My happiness became something he can easily steal.

    Now with truth eyes for that i can see.
    I'm in a trouble ,a catastrophe with it i can't deal.
    My best friend into another college will be.
    That a wound in my heart ,all doctors can't heal.

    As if i was pinched by a hostile bee.
    After that all beautiful things to me don't have any appeal.
    I need to close the portal of sadness but where's the key?
    I hope i can put my friend in my heart then i for it tightly seal.

    and here's a special add-on for everyone reading this
    One second is so long so i'll count to nine,
    So give me a reply you members of anime online!!!
    A reply that makes the smile in my face shine.
    a good reply that makes my heart feel so fine.
    Life and Death are always one and the same
    EVEN IF A RAINBOW IS BROKEN THERE'S STILL THE SKY

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    Re: There's a broken heart when a friend leaves apart

    Hum close friend I take it well writen to by your friend that is one true frien you have there, but watch the grammer but keep it up. hope you guys keep talking. (you know there is such a program called email)
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    Re: There's a broken heart when a friend leaves apart

    nani mo hanasu desu? @.@ ahhh shiranai you... neanese.. wakaranai..

    aww...i know how you both would feel...i was separated by my best friend too... he is now in a college...> 360 km < 500 km away..

    Nice poem.. but the grammar is a bit off at some parts... and nice small poem down there...

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    Re: There's a broken heart when a friend leaves apart

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    nani mo hanasu desu? @.@ ahhh shiranai you... neanese.. wakaranai..

    aww...i know how you both would feel...i was separated by my best friend too... he is now in a college...> 360 km < 500 km away..

    Nice poem.. but the grammar is a bit off at some parts... and nice small poem down there...
    plz tell me which parts ... so i can learn my mistakes ....
    Life and Death are always one and the same
    EVEN IF A RAINBOW IS BROKEN THERE'S STILL THE SKY

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