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    These Ten Little Words

    These Ten Little Words

    I was sitting in my chair,
    Thinking of what to say.
    Looking for words to declare,
    But the words just wouldn’t obey.

    To put my thoughts into words,
    I racked my little brain.
    Until I saw stars and little birds,
    Laughing at me while I tried in vain.

    While taking a break to rest my mind,
    I thought some music would help me think.
    Opening the program I asked it to find,
    A soothing song and not one that would stink.

    Its choice surprised me,
    But in a happy way.
    It was the song that you gave me,
    Way back on that special day.

    Refreshed with thoughts of you,
    I sat up tall and proud.
    I smiled as some words rang true,
    And I said them aloud.

    Smiling as the phrase,
    Slowly escaped from my lips.
    Saying it without falter or daze,
    Like I was an actor reading from scripts.

    Closing my eyes,
    I said it again.
    Then I began to surmise,
    So I counted the words to ten.

    This was just what I wanted to say,
    These words were not wrong.
    I knew I would find a way,
    I just can’t believe it took this long.

    The words are so simple and yet so deep,
    That they mean everything I wanted them to.
    Words so true that they almost made me weep,
    And now these words I say to you.

    Smiling lightly I reply “Hola, Angie. Mi amor.”
    "Te quiero con todo mi corazón.”
    These ten words are the ones I adore,
    These ten words remind me I’m not alone.
    ~tds (the divine shadow)

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    Re: These Ten Little Words

    i liked it it was very good

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    Re: These Ten Little Words

    thank you ^.^
    sometimes rhyming is very hard especially when switching languages XD

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