They don't see... They don't see what I see,
nor do they know what I know.
They'll never understand why
our love continuously grows.
They can't listen to reason
and they can't comprehend
why we're meant to be lovers
instead of "just friends".
Only negative thoughts
and rumors in my ear.
If they only knew why I
hold you so dear.
They think that I'm
dumb for staying so long.
But they're on the wrong page
with no lyrics to this song.
But they'll never truly know
until the problem's solved.
Then we get to laugh and
point at them all.
So don't worry about them
even though they are fam.
Because you are my girl
and I am your man...
O.O omg... You just totally explained how I feel towards Rushil.... I've been trying to create a poem that lets him know and you just did... Thank you (even though it wasn't written for me) Thank you so much.. ^-^ It was truly beautiful. I would Love to hear more..
Last edited by AngelicDemon201092; Oct 26, 2007 at 02:22 PM.
Thanks, AngelicDemon! I'm glad you like this poem! To be quite honest, this just popped out of my head while I was working on an error project here at my job. ^_^ I don't know where it came from.Originally Posted by AngelicDemon201092
Anywho, I appreciate your taking the time to read my poetry! And I'm glad that my you, my poem and I have something in common. ^_^
Gives a big round of applause!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
Family sucks. I don't know whatever made me ever believe the one I have is better then the one I want to build. i don't need them like i've always though I need my own damn family. Screw them all. Fantastically felt and written poem. Touching and not in the life time movie sort a corny way. I really like this one.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
Thanks, Astaroth, for your applaud and comment. I'm glad you liked it. Also, special thanks to bratling. I know you're tired of all the BS. Just know that I'm here for you and always will be.
Of course I really did like it. And I really am exhausted. Trust me though, I know your always here. I hope that won't change.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
I like this poem very much. Well written. Keep up the good work. [:
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