The Things I Like

I like the sight of messy, melodious, mahogany hair
That rolls and contort boldly over the face
And my crimson love flows faster and faster
As I realise the gaze of those immense hazel nut eyes
Which compliments the pure pearl white skin
On the lofty elongated body
The tint of which blends perfectly as if it were one
Enhanced by a smooth blush of rose pink lips
Delicate and kind that softens the face of masculinity
Captivatingly coherent and with mascular strength and beauty
Like the fierce lion roaming through my dreams.

I like the sound of tender, tuneful, tranquil lips
That is so rich as golden siver roses
A symphonic nectar as a blend
Of an alluring violin and strong lustful harp
Though it owns a bottomless penetrating voice
It's still calming, genuine, serene and loved
It takes a form of tranquil midnight waves
The sound could wrap, engulf and devour you
Like an orchestra playiong every love instrument
To every man and God

I like the touch of smooth silky staunch skin
Comparable only to the finest silk and velvet
It's thick, course hairis the mahogany trees
And I can feel the long sharp nails on my delicate skin
Strong hands hold grip tighten seductively squeeze my body
Sending verile surges of inconceiveable pressures throughtout me
Making me crave his intense resilient, powerful compelling body
Seductively fused with a vibrant artistically imaginable personality
Impeccably the real inside is all a touch of warmth
Like a rare snuggly crimson teddy bear
Therapeutically intense but delicate with love

I like the smell of it's daily, delicate, dewlike scent
The strong seductive sensational scent of a man
Emminates through me so vibrantly, alluring and compelling
That you can tell that the person is right behind you
Waiting for his name to be called
His fragrant fruity fabulous shampoo
Always flow to tickle my nose
Even when he respire and then perspire
The scent still tickles me and inspire
For these are the three scents of a man
And only in the strength of each particular scent
Does it differ in both time and man

I like the taste of strawberry sweet lips
The lusciously divine appealingly naughty dark chocolate
Powerfully sending my crimson love surging through my body
The feel of dark chocolate fused with strong precious hazel nuts
On my tongue, and makes my hair stand on end
The sensuous taste is so intoxicating exhilierating
With his lips of rose pink nectar so divine and pure
He seeps through and into my body making me
Sacred, mystical and unstained with him
But, the delicious chocolate coated strawberry
Melt, coat and stain my mouth and also deep within me
And the appetizing aroma of cologne and sweat captivates and enrolls me
To aggressively hold grip tighten and seductively squeeze him
Temptation circulates throughout me, teasing me
With it's staunch brown crimson encased treasure
And it deliciously combines within me
Forming a deep love between him and I

ok sry it's soo long. My best friend wrote this poem, Sunita, AKA sunlikelove. She's not on AO but i liked it so much i decided to post it
What do you think?

very detailed descriptions...i love it... the way the words are played with... they were nice... nicely done... your friend is quite skilled :) she should keep it up ^^

Sorry I didn't read the whole thing. But I don't have the attention span and had something to say! I really enjoy your description so far. It's beautiful and your words flow freely.

i guess its alright its a bad ass poem but it needs some work just a little bit but ya its beatiful.

and i thought the one i just made was long! Any way great job! i like most of them too! I love strawberries, and Peaches! Keep up the work i want to see more!