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    The Things I Like

    I like the sight of messy, melodious, mahogany hair
    That rolls and contort boldly over the face
    And my crimson love flows faster and faster
    As I realise the gaze of those immense hazel nut eyes
    Which compliments the pure pearl white skin
    On the lofty elongated body
    The tint of which blends perfectly as if it were one
    Enhanced by a smooth blush of rose pink lips
    Delicate and kind that softens the face of masculinity
    Captivatingly coherent and with mascular strength and beauty
    Like the fierce lion roaming through my dreams.

    I like the sound of tender, tuneful, tranquil lips
    That is so rich as golden siver roses
    A symphonic nectar as a blend
    Of an alluring violin and strong lustful harp
    Though it owns a bottomless penetrating voice
    It's still calming, genuine, serene and loved
    It takes a form of tranquil midnight waves
    The sound could wrap, engulf and devour you
    Like an orchestra playiong every love instrument
    To every man and God

    I like the touch of smooth silky staunch skin
    Comparable only to the finest silk and velvet
    It's thick, course hairis the mahogany trees
    And I can feel the long sharp nails on my delicate skin
    Strong hands hold grip tighten seductively squeeze my body
    Sending verile surges of inconceiveable pressures throughtout me
    Making me crave his intense resilient, powerful compelling body
    Seductively fused with a vibrant artistically imaginable personality
    Impeccably the real inside is all a touch of warmth
    Like a rare snuggly crimson teddy bear
    Therapeutically intense but delicate with love

    I like the smell of it's daily, delicate, dewlike scent
    The strong seductive sensational scent of a man
    Emminates through me so vibrantly, alluring and compelling
    That you can tell that the person is right behind you
    Waiting for his name to be called
    His fragrant fruity fabulous shampoo
    Always flow to tickle my nose
    Even when he respire and then perspire
    The scent still tickles me and inspire
    For these are the three scents of a man
    And only in the strength of each particular scent
    Does it differ in both time and man

    I like the taste of strawberry sweet lips
    The lusciously divine appealingly naughty dark chocolate
    Powerfully sending my crimson love surging through my body
    The feel of dark chocolate fused with strong precious hazel nuts
    On my tongue, and makes my hair stand on end
    The sensuous taste is so intoxicating exhilierating
    With his lips of rose pink nectar so divine and pure
    He seeps through and into my body making me
    Sacred, mystical and unstained with him
    But, the delicious chocolate coated strawberry
    Melt, coat and stain my mouth and also deep within me
    And the appetizing aroma of cologne and sweat captivates and enrolls me
    To aggressively hold grip tighten and seductively squeeze him
    Temptation circulates throughout me, teasing me
    With it's staunch brown crimson encased treasure
    And it deliciously combines within me
    Forming a deep love between him and I

    ok sry it's soo long. My best friend wrote this poem, Sunita, AKA sunlikelove. She's not on AO but i liked it so much i decided to post it
    What do you think?

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    Re: The Things I Like

    very detailed descriptions...i love it... the way the words are played with... they were nice... nicely done... your friend is quite skilled she should keep it up ^^

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    Sorry I didn't read the whole thing. But I don't have the attention span and had something to say! I really enjoy your description so far. It's beautiful and your words flow freely.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    i guess its alright its a bad ass poem but it needs some work just a little bit but ya its beatiful.

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    Re: The Things I Like

    and i thought the one i just made was long! Any way great job! i like most of them too! I love strawberries, and Peaches! Keep up the work i want to see more!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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