things we do

things we do are mighty strange things we do are sure to change cause the things we do are all we got the things we do are all for not:(:

mybe try to make it more clear? beacuse when reading it really to be truethfull it sounded like a bunch of words in a line... mybe not to you or the next person but just mybe try to make a little more clear to the read.... (sry)

Things we do are all for not?

That is words of a depressing lot...

How faith glimmers in the glint of the sun

How have all these things gone undone?

when moon mets stars the heavens hurl a ghastly glow upon the world make not the truth with thine own eyes for heaven and earth begin to cry

hmm i didnt know u wrote poerty? ^.^..ur pretty good..but put it in poem lines ..separte the meanings.

thanks for your words so soft and sweet
i pray someday that we will meet
in themorning when the rain is done
the sun will shine and we'll have some fun