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    things we do

    things we do are mighty strange things we do are sure to change cause the things we do are all we got the things we do are all for not
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: things we do

    mybe try to make it more clear? beacuse when reading it really to be truethfull it sounded like a bunch of words in a line... mybe not to you or the next person but just mybe try to make a little more clear to the read.... (sry)
    death and life are one and the same

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    Things we do are all for not?

    That is words of a depressing lot...

    How faith glimmers in the glint of the sun

    How have all these things gone undone?

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    when moon mets stars the heavens hurl a ghastly glow upon the world make not the truth with thine own eyes for heaven and earth begin to cry
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: things we do

    hmm i didnt know u wrote poerty? ^.^..ur pretty good..but put it in poem lines ..separte the meanings.

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    Re: things we do

    thanks for your words so soft and sweet
    i pray someday that we will meet
    in themorning when the rain is done
    the sun will shine and we'll have some fun
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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