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    things will never be the same

    this isn't an emo but my feelings,
    since i am not that girl, i express my feelings in words,
    rather than a fluffy pink diary and matching pen.
    makes me laugh on how i hold stuff in,can't get it out, just making me wanna scream and shout.
    hoping one day i can stop holding grudges, hoping one day i can learn to forgive.
    got's lots of shit to get off my chest , but i wont say it all here, when most of the people are all ears.
    not wanting to forget all the fun we had, or all the joy we shared.
    i made you laugh, you did the same in return.
    but now, im afraid all our smiles have learned.
    they learned to not trust anyone or anything,
    especially anyone who you think was always gonna be your friend.
    things might have been patched up between you and i,
    but the memories of deceit will never die.
    as for him who shall remain nameless you can have her.
    you loved her once and you can love again. you have never seen me nor talked to me but say you love,
    that one word that i never heard of.
    can we ever be together in real, or is this some dream, that i feel will never end.
    hoping my life will become back to the way it was, before i met him.
    but there is one last thing i must say before i depart
    i dont regret meeting any of you, and that's from the bottom of my heart.

    Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen

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    Re: things will never be the same

    It's not emo, but is very emotional... made me stare at the screen for quite a time, very nice use of words, very well put. Gives me this strange emotion, but it's well done, 10/10.

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    *chews on words*
    That poem really reminds me of that time my dear friend broke up with her nw ex. It portrays the feelings of one who is really hurting on the inside. Cheem it is. 8.5/10
    I really have no idea of the entire posting is the poem or what. So not full marks or anything...

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    Re: things will never be the same

    thanks. i meant everyword of itand it was all true

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