Thinking out loud

**Y'know, you can only hear so much negativity from people until you start thinking the same thing from time to time. This is what I've been hearing for the last six months. Unfortunately it's affecting me a little bit... In a small way. I don't want to do any of what this says, but people are my inspiration sometimes and this is what they say...**

What the hell is wrong with you?!
Stand up! Get out there and fight!
If you want to feel sorry for yourself,
that's fine, but leave me out of it!
Wait... I'm talkin' to myself again, arent I?

Quit cryin' like a big baby!
Nobody likes an emo-boy.
Wipe those tears off your face and
turn that pain in to rage! Go forth
and show him--no--THE WORLD what you can do!
Stop... Am I thinkin' out loud again?

Stop acting like the world will end
if you stop waiting. STOP WAITING!!
Get your act together, you're a grown
ass man! Can't you think for yourself?
Quit it... Why do I beat myself up?

Hey Sprout, That is really good. I always end up talk to myself all the time. I think there is a saying the most intellegent conversation is with yourself. Not quite sure, but yeah I do like your pome. Nice job.

this was really cool i will admit i got confused during it (probably cuz im mentaly ill not because of the poem) but all in all it was really good (as usual)

Thanks you guys! I didn't think anyone would like this one. I usually don't post my stuff that doesn't rhyme or that I don't find satisfactory. So, it makes me glad to hear that you both liked it. ^_^