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    Thinking of you

    'very day
    when i woke up
    I never want to think of you
    but
    I think of you
    Why ?
    You come to my life suddenly
    Then
    You out to my life easily
    why ?
    Because your family...
    and...
    I!
    thinking of you
    I cry alone in the darkness
    in the lonely night
    and
    when the time i think of you
    that I will lose you...
    You came to me
    ...
    thinking of you !


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    del topic no the answer, ok ?
    Last edited by lovedloven; Jul 21, 2006 at 12:52 AM.
    Mong anh sẽ maĩ mãi nghĩ đến em, loven! v?* em cũng thế !

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    tell me what do you see
    Yes I want to be free
    Yes I lose my mind...

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    Re: Thinking of you

    very nice poem i like how you put a question over each
    explanation and wanted to know why and finaly trying
    to forget him but you cant . very cool i like this alot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Thinking of you

    Don't ya hate that? famlies gettin in the way of love.............Sucks ballz, dont it
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: Thinking of you

    uh...
    I and him still loved each other
    but coz his family, im afraid althought he said me don't be afraid.
    i love him
    now, he is so sick and be staying in the hospital at Paris
    Mong anh sẽ maĩ mãi nghĩ đến em, loven! v?* em cũng thế !

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    tell me what do you see
    Yes I want to be free
    Yes I lose my mind...

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    Re: Thinking of you

    Well, because you put a question mark at the end of each feeling... Dont you think you should expand more on that feeling? I just felt as though though it was incomplete. Work on giving more details.
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    Re: Thinking of you

    hey nice poem man, keep it up.

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    Re: Thinking of you

    Very good poem...I think its safe for me to say that i experienced the "thinking about her parts"...Could never get her off my mind...like a drug.
    If you strive for one thing in life for so long...It's a given you'll miss others along the way...that's how it is...That's life

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