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    Thinking Of You

    Why am I thinking of you?
    All the memories are comming back
    Good and bad
    Every kiss and every tear
    What made me think of you?
    Are you thinkinng of me?
    I need to know
    But I dont want the pain
    My heart can't take anymore
    Will you come back?
    I think I want you to
    Maybe you'll treat me better
    I should stop
    The past is still in my mind
    Why did you treat me that way?
    I know I deserve better
    But it is still the past
    Every memory has came back
    Still you're on my mind
    Why can't I stop thinking of you?
    My future needs to be thought of someone else
    Who else can I think of?
    You're all I know
    The only love I've had
    Will you come back?
    We need to talk
    Work out our problems
    Maybe then, I'll be done thinking of you
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    Re: Thinking Of You

    old forgotton memorys and pain is such sorrow, nice poem i like it keep up

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    Re: Thinking Of You

    Nice, its good. Such sorrow and sadness in a poem... it jus makes it all the better. It sounds as if this may be a reality poem as well, if is , then it is even better. Anywayz great poem

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    Re: Thinking Of You

    Thanxx soo much everyone, im glad you all liked it!!!!

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    Re: Thinking Of You

    I have a similar thought about someone, but I guess some things just can't conclude as maybe the other finds it too hard to do so...or you could be illusioned as well...though I won't dwell on this thought any longer.

    Your poem is of modern standards, not rhyming, being quite pointed at a certain person, yet many can relate to. I prefer something that reflects not only one question or one direction...often I put a good and bad thought in my writings. Though it's not the case for all of mine, but it makes things more complexe and sometimes not everyone understand it...which is why simplicity is sometimes best...oh well, that's all for now, nice poem

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