Third eye

hello, there fellow AO, member. its been quite a long time since i last posted a poem. well, thanks for reading. you may post comments and critiques, it is highly appreciated. ^^

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Third eye

Why am I seeing things
That people can’t see?
Why am I hearing screams
That no one can’t hear?

Every now and then I fear,
Of seeing people who are bleeding,
But every time I draw near,
My hands pass right through them.

My ears are getting worn-out,
From the infinite deafening screams,
The endless curses of revenge,
The pleas for help on unfinished business.

What can I possibly do?
I couldn’t ask anyone for help!
Alone would I ever suffer,
From this life I am fated for.

very cool poem raja its been a while since i read anything from you
and this poem is great reminds me of that movies 6th since
and i like how you desribed the the feeling if always hears and seeing things
like your going crazy

^^ thanks Chris for posting a comment on my poem, it is highly appreciated. ^^

Raja!!!! Hey Wonderful poem! I should've talked to you to inspire me! My Bro HolderoftheDarkChalice helped me out, but anyways you poem awesome just like your fanfic and I'm still anxiously awaiting chapter 5! You did a great job! :thumb: 5 out of 5 from the Fox! The reason for the five is it's totally different style that I've have never seen and I Love it!

this is a bit sad.. The guy bearing all the pain for himself... I wish people whould show others their emotions and tell another person.. I dont like to see others suffer...

@ BlueFox: Thanks also for a wonderful comment on my poem^^ it is really appreciated. a 5 out of 5! ^^

@rksamurai: thanks on commenting on my poem it is highly appreciated.

hey raja awesome poem none of mine can beat that,but it won't hurt too try ^_^so watch out for my poems I'm going to posed some soon^_^well peace out

Omg!! This is soooo awesome Raja!!! I sooo love it!!! The sadness that you wrote in your poem was wonderful.Going through something like that would probably drive anyone insane.Awesome job as always Raja!! :)