those night i woke up next to you?
must of been out of my damn mind
with six billion here
there simply is no "one of a kind"
falling of the bed
but not to her surprise
staring in the mirror
she love the horror in those eyes
she wasnt suppose to be here
not allowed to free fall
wasnt suppose to feel like this
maybe im wasnt suppose to wake up at all
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Short... bad grammar, no punctuation....
And, the rawest poem Ive read today. I can't believe how good this was! It packed such a big punch. It had good word play, and imagery!!! I'm not a huge stickler when it comes to grammar. I'm far more impressed by concept and creativity... both of which you have here. Good job!
... Not Ever Again...
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