Thought of You

Thinking of you always
wanting you here with me
and dreaming of you constantly
Reminders of you through out the day
Thinking about what to say
excuse me for a moment if i may
Im not sure how to let this out
It makes me want to scream n' shout
Not knowing what to talk about
listening to each other breathe
Nothing will ever, ever make me wanna
leave

Althought i've known you for sometime
you still seem to take my breathe away
Please just tell me how,
The way my heart skips a beat,
lifts me up off my feet,
The way you hug
The way you hold
Ensuring our relationship will never get old
We will grow together
yet grwo apart
you now hold the keys
The keys to my heart
you the one for me i know
To your heart is wherer i plan
to go
So hear me now, and hear me tru
Cuz all im trying to say is
"I love you"

wow...all i can say is omg you rock!!!!very good emotions through out the poem it almost made me cry so romantic...*sniffles* keep it ↑ *runs away crying*
♥~*The Princess*~♥

This is very long and somewhat cluttered but its very good. I enjoyed it.

Hey, I really like this too. Very sweet and romantic and yet not that puppy love child-like kind of love. The long lasting gonna stick around kind. Kudos!

*nods twice* i agree with bratling... kudos to u~! i like this 1... it's very sweet... ^^

good job ^^

AHHH^^ you all are awesome:D thanks for the kudos! and next time ill make it not so cluttered=]

you've expressed yourself very good :smile:
it's romantic and very very nice

AWWWWWW I love it soo much.

The ryming and the words you used were great. I loved it all.

I have to say two thums up and a round pf aplouse.lol.

Very very good.