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    Thought of You

    Thinking of you always
    wanting you here with me
    and dreaming of you constantly
    Reminders of you through out the day
    Thinking about what to say
    excuse me for a moment if i may
    Im not sure how to let this out
    It makes me want to scream n' shout
    Not knowing what to talk about
    listening to each other breathe
    Nothing will ever, ever make me wanna
    leave

    Althought i've known you for sometime
    you still seem to take my breathe away
    Please just tell me how,
    The way my heart skips a beat,
    lifts me up off my feet,
    The way you hug
    The way you hold
    Ensuring our relationship will never get old
    We will grow together
    yet grwo apart
    you now hold the keys
    The keys to my heart
    you the one for me i know
    To your heart is wherer i plan
    to go
    So hear me now, and hear me tru
    Cuz all im trying to say is
    "I love you"

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    Re: Thought of You

    wow...all i can say is omg you rock!!!!very good emotions through out the poem it almost made me cry so romantic...*sniffles* keep it ↑ *runs away crying*
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    Re: Thought of You

    This is very long and somewhat cluttered but its very good. I enjoyed it.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Thought of You

    Hey, I really like this too. Very sweet and romantic and yet not that puppy love child-like kind of love. The long lasting gonna stick around kind. Kudos!

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    Re: Thought of You

    *nods twice* i agree with bratling... kudos to u~! i like this 1... it's very sweet... ^^

    good job ^^

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    Re: Thought of You

    AHHH^^ you all are awesome thanks for the kudos! and next time ill make it not so cluttered=]

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    Re: Thought of You

    you've expressed yourself very good
    it's romantic and very very nice

    "If you need something to worship, then worship life - all life, every last crawling bit of it! We're all in this beauty together!" - Frank Herbert

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    Re: Thought of You

    AWWWWWW I love it soo much.

    The ryming and the words you used were great. I loved it all.

    I have to say two thums up and a round pf aplouse.lol.

    Very very good.

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