Thoughts that never end?

A smile comes across your face a
firm embrace brings all your troubles
to the surface and make them go away,
things are just so much better.

Something brings your feelings to life
and a brighter day appears , and the dawning
of a new day brings ideas of rainbows and chirping
birds , how you hold on to your dreams as the day
seems so crystal clear.

The hill you sit on lets you look over the lands
as thoughts of how things are going in circles
in a never ending loop making things redundant
and dull , things need to change lives need to move on.

As the day spirals downward from light to dark
because the confusion you make for yourself
when things that make perfect sense begin unraveling
and the back ground of your thoughts is reveald as the
sky is torn just enough to see the truth of your situation.

Questions become fact as you try and reason
everything but all you get is more questions what is
it that makes you think that life is so mundane ? things
are the way you want them so be board with a smile.

Nothing really maters now as you let the day spiral still
and more of the truth is revealed as that back ground is
shown from the almost perfect day you are having on
that hill side.

Sweet poem it sounds kinda romantic. Seems like it describes a beautiful day that is going so well and you don't have a care in the world. awesome job and I can't wait to read more which I'm sure I won't have to wait long.

Beautiful, very descriptive poem. With such words... I mean really... Such imagery. I wish you had a paintbrush, and you could paint my life with words like this.

You called me once right? I got the message, but I was sleeping. I have insomnia and I sleep in most mornings. And I also can't afford long distance calls to call you back :(

not bad i really like!!i gets sad for a moment!!good job!!

very good it has tons of emotions through out the poem,and thats what i liked about it cant wait for more kk? keep it ↑ ^^ ♥~*The Princess*~♥