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    Thoughts that never end?

    A smile comes across your face a
    firm embrace brings all your troubles
    to the surface and make them go away,
    things are just so much better.

    Something brings your feelings to life
    and a brighter day appears , and the dawning
    of a new day brings ideas of rainbows and chirping
    birds , how you hold on to your dreams as the day
    seems so crystal clear.

    The hill you sit on lets you look over the lands
    as thoughts of how things are going in circles
    in a never ending loop making things redundant
    and dull , things need to change lives need to move on.

    As the day spirals downward from light to dark
    because the confusion you make for yourself
    when things that make perfect sense begin unraveling
    and the back ground of your thoughts is reveald as the
    sky is torn just enough to see the truth of your situation.

    Questions become fact as you try and reason
    everything but all you get is more questions what is
    it that makes you think that life is so mundane ? things
    are the way you want them so be board with a smile.

    Nothing really maters now as you let the day spiral still
    and more of the truth is revealed as that back ground is
    shown from the almost perfect day you are having on
    that hill side.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Thoughts that never end?

    Sweet poem it sounds kinda romantic. Seems like it describes a beautiful day that is going so well and you don't have a care in the world. awesome job and I can't wait to read more which I'm sure I won't have to wait long.
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    Re: Thoughts that never end?

    Beautiful, very descriptive poem. With such words... I mean really... Such imagery. I wish you had a paintbrush, and you could paint my life with words like this.

    You called me once right? I got the message, but I was sleeping. I have insomnia and I sleep in most mornings. And I also can't afford long distance calls to call you back
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Thoughts that never end?

    not bad i really like!!i gets sad for a moment!!good job!!

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    Re: Thoughts that never end?

    very good it has tons of emotions through out the poem,and thats what i liked about it cant wait for more kk? keep it ↑ ^^ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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