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    Thoughts of Suicide

    Here I am again lost in the endless thoughts of you
    Thinking of why you have to go through all the pain that you do
    It's like your screams will never be heard
    Like you die more with every little word
    Reaching out but to find no touch
    Just thinking of all the pain is to much
    You watch yourself fade away
    Just waiting for the time of that day
    You know it's coming fast
    Because your body just won't last
    Your feel your body lose its soul
    Letting the dangers take hold
    Making you weak without a straight thought
    Knowing that you've lost the war that you fought
    Your face grows old one by one
    But you love the feeling of being numb
    When I look at you now it's not what it seems
    But you’re nothing like you where, or was it in my dreams
    Remembering the call I got when I wasn't home
    Nothing but tears fell over the phone
    Telling me your thoughts of suicide and how you wanted to die
    But the only thing I could do is cry
    I believe dreams come true
    But nightmares do to
    And this was there
    But all I could do was watch you die with despair
    With that sharp object in your hand getting ready to let go
    That night I watch the darkness take hold
    But when you left it touched another soul
    With the knife that you used, the knife that stole you
    It came to me and I could feel the cold blood run down my finger tips
    It was like a deadly poison was laid upon my lips
    It will steal your soul
    It will never let go
    You've faded away and you left me here to stay
    The empty spot you left will never feel
    My black shattered heart will never heal
    But my black soul tells me I'm the reason you wanted to die
    I'm your cause of suicide

    PS:
    You were my heaven and my heart, but I have nothing now thanks to you
    And now I’ll make you kill you. While the blood trickles down my wrist, I slowly kill myself.
    Trying to hide the pain, but I do so in vain
    Because my memory of you brings it all back.
    It is a will to live that I lack,
    Now that you are never coming back.

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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    Re: Thoughts of Suicide

    wow this is gr8 I hope u write more...you're very good are you a poet??
    the heart feels what the eyes can not see, and knows what the mind can not understand...

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    Re: Thoughts of Suicide

    Quote Originally Posted by Ebisu View Post
    wow this is gr8 I hope u write more...you're very good are you a poet??
    it's not that great,but thank you for the flattery

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    Re: Thoughts of Suicide

    Oh wow This is like the best I've read in a while. And don;t say it's not that good because it is. I really like it.
    The imagry and rhyming just brought it all togther and made it really good. I love it. and I hope to see more.(^.^)

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    Re: Thoughts of Suicide

    Well it was long, but worth reading. Break them into stanzas if you wish ^_^

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    Re: Thoughts of Suicide

    Quote Originally Posted by May_Bloodrose_Pagan View Post
    it's not that great,but thank you for the flattery
    yes it is and you're welcome but what is so funny??
    the heart feels what the eyes can not see, and knows what the mind can not understand...

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    Re: Thoughts of Suicide

    I agree with Rave's suggestion ^^ easier to read if they are in stanzas...
    good poem though ^^

    Suicide is not a good thing...

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    Re: Thoughts of Suicide

    Why doesn't anyone make a poem about flowers anymore, heheheheh. It was ok, a little long though. Nice job though.
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    Because they have obtained that level they are arrogant. You have to kep in mind when you talk about these guys they are kind of dorks who probably didn't excel at much and this is their only outlet to flex their muscles. Their egos would suffer no less so the the forum suffers some more. Watch one way or another they will probably repond to this post with a threat. But there are better forums out there. Private messege Zev.

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