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    Re: Thoughts of Suicide

    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    Well it was long, but worth reading. Break them into stanzas if you wish ^_^
    It would be more pleasing to the eye if it were in stanzas.
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    thanks I'll do the stanzas in my next poem good tip I'm glad you like it

    it's not really about suicide it's actually about love relationship issues
    Last edited by Kasai; Mar 27, 2007 at 02:55 PM. Reason: Two separate posts merged into one.

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    Re: Thoughts of Suicide

    Flowers????????*confused* you mean those sometimes pretty smelling things that grow out of the ground like weeds that eventually die like every one and thing else k? I'll write about them...I guess...If you're into that kinda thing...
    the heart feels what the eyes can not see, and knows what the mind can not understand...

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    lol I know, what does flowers have to do with the price on tea in china?? I mean If you're into that kinda thing I wrote a poem called "poem for roses" but I haven't had the chance to post it up yet and plus I need to edit it...it's not very good..

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    Is it seriosly about flowers or is that just the title??? And I'm sure it's as good as this one...why do you critize your own work like that??
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    no it's not really about fowers and yes i critize my work there is nothing wrong with that...so back off

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    sorry i didn't mean to affend you...I didn't mean it that way
    the heart feels what the eyes can not see, and knows what the mind can not understand...

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    Re: Thoughts of Suicide

    I like it...dark...painful...love...loss...and my favorite endless torment all in one poem...excellent job!
    I'll get you!! I'll get you all!! even if it's the last thing I do!!"We Must Bow to the Inevitable"

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