Thread: Thoughts Of You!!

As the sun sets and the wind
blow's i can hear the whsper of
the ocean as the waves crash
against the shore taking my breath
with such enjoyment.

I lay on my back as the sky
turn's to night the moon dances
above as the stars tiwnkle there light
my mind drifts to you as my heart skips
a beat can this be love? or is it infatuation?

Surely as i lay here and the wind
slowly brushes my face on the twilight
night where my thought's drift thinking
of you can it be true? do i love you?

I close my eye's for a moment and
you face floats in my mind's eye
and i smile, your glowing blue eye's,
your long fllowing hair the smell
of your perfume is it addiction?

I wake from what must have been
a few hours sleep the sun now rises
and it's reflection dances on the oceans
suface like a fire with a warm glow and it
reminds me of your personality is it passion?

As i get up from where i lay i start walking
against the wind to feel its strong breeze
like i want to feel your touch when your
in my arm's and the rest of my day i think
of you and these things i ponder.


ok this one i thing was a bit better i didnt
try for the short verses this time hoping to
get a better image and affect from the writing
any comment or suggestion would be aprecaited