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    Thoughts Of You!!

    As the sun sets and the wind
    blow's i can hear the whsper of
    the ocean as the waves crash
    against the shore taking my breath
    with such enjoyment.

    I lay on my back as the sky
    turn's to night the moon dances
    above as the stars tiwnkle there light
    my mind drifts to you as my heart skips
    a beat can this be love? or is it infatuation?

    Surely as i lay here and the wind
    slowly brushes my face on the twilight
    night where my thought's drift thinking
    of you can it be true? do i love you?

    I close my eye's for a moment and
    you face floats in my mind's eye
    and i smile, your glowing blue eye's,
    your long fllowing hair the smell
    of your perfume is it addiction?

    I wake from what must have been
    a few hours sleep the sun now rises
    and it's reflection dances on the oceans
    suface like a fire with a warm glow and it
    reminds me of your personality is it passion?

    As i get up from where i lay i start walking
    against the wind to feel its strong breeze
    like i want to feel your touch when your
    in my arm's and the rest of my day i think
    of you and these things i ponder.


    ok this one i thing was a bit better i didnt
    try for the short verses this time hoping to
    get a better image and affect from the writing
    any comment or suggestion would be aprecaited
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    your poetry is great..........................................

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    thank you very much it took a wahile with this one and the idea i got for this was
    someone i was thinking about. anyway it was about somone who was in love but wonderd how since he never loved anyone before
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    wow u definitely put a lot of effort into this

    can i ask is this sort of like to do with someone u're with or used to be with?

    anyways i can related to it since i've found someone who i do truly love, so great work man

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    I close my eye's for a moment and
    you face floats in my mind's eye
    and i smile, your glowing blue eye's,
    your long fllowing hair the smell
    of your perfume is it addiction?
    ^_^ attraction~

    I like this poem ^^ wakaka ~ keep it up! You're improving rapidly~!

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    ur poem was awesome. it has a lot of feeling. i've wrote a poem similar to that but it had a darker meaning
    Just wanting to be myself.

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    Dude I love it!! I don't know how long or hard it was but it sure did pay off!! Keep it up!
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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    thanks everyone and uea it took a whil to get it the
    way i wanted. and tblade its someone here that i like
    but im not sure how to aprach the situation right now
    and yea she is old enough lol
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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