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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    wow chris, i really loved thi poem it's so nice and has lots of feeling
    keep it up ^.^




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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    thanks and i will i think i know what i want from my writing but im still woking on some stuff
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    Omg...Wow...That was sooooooooooo awesome Big Bro! I could really feel the emotion coming from the poem.Loved it.Awesome job!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    thansk you im glad you liked it its an imporvemt i think
    but im still working the length out . i might keep writting
    this way so i want have to worry about length at all
    but i am glad you liked it though
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    I really liked it. that is a great poem.Keep up the good work sweetie.

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    who do you like on here? please tell me

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    It's a great poem. It's great that you wrote a poem about a guy who finally found his true love and wondered why he never felt this way. It has character and it's good that you put in questions in the poem. Keep up the good work!

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    Re: Thoughts Of You!!

    thanks im glad you liked it and saw what i was working for
    im going to try and do more like theme wise but maybe more details
    not usre im still thinking about that
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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