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i get the thrill
when i kill
and blood spills
and hearts unfill
i get the thrill
when i steal
and i make a
tasty cannibal meal
i get the thrill
when i chant
and shoot the dog
as he fuking pant
i get the thrill
when i fuk
and get an
amazing dick suck
tell me if u like it
Last edited by levitatinganimelover; Jun 21, 2007 at 07:10 AM. Reason: cursing
is any one gonna comment ****..............................
I like it! I think it's pretty catchy in a way! And I also like it cause it could make a pretty funny song in a way so I hope to see more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
its a bit vulgar but the poem as
a hole is great , the aspect from
where you come from makes it seem
that the only thing that natters is the moment.
my self the moment is a great thing
but if it lingers that moment turns
dull and meaningless , but the poem
is really good you could have been
less bold with some of it , but thats what
makes this pome great you put it out there.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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