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    the thrill

    i get the thrill
    when i kill
    and blood spills
    and hearts unfill

    i get the thrill
    when i steal
    and i make a
    tasty cannibal meal

    i get the thrill
    when i chant
    and shoot the dog
    as he fuking pant

    i get the thrill
    when i fuk
    and get an
    amazing dick suck




    tell me if u like it
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    Re: the thrill

    is any one gonna comment ****..............................

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    Re: the thrill

    I like it! I think it's pretty catchy in a way! And I also like it cause it could make a pretty funny song in a way so I hope to see more!
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    Re: the thrill

    its a bit vulgar but the poem as
    a hole is great , the aspect from
    where you come from makes it seem
    that the only thing that natters is the moment.

    my self the moment is a great thing
    but if it lingers that moment turns
    dull and meaningless , but the poem
    is really good you could have been
    less bold with some of it , but thats what
    makes this pome great you put it out there.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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