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    Through With It

    Im through with it
    How did I ever fall for someone like you?
    I remember when you first asked for a chance
    Once was more than you deserved
    Now I have myself to blame
    Leave me alone
    You can stop with the apologies now
    I cant blame you for my foolishness
    Sometimes I still wonder
    Did you change on me
    Or did you finally show your true colors
    It doesnt matter anymore though
    You helped me realize
    I deserve better
    So its cool in all that you finally realized you're sorry
    But like i said,
    Im through with it

    an old poem i wrote when i was mad......

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    Re: Through With It

    well I am mad now and that is why I like your poem even more!!! it has strong feelings in it and it was really interesting to read it... and it tells so much about my feelings that it's just amazing...
    A nice work!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Through With It

    Wow. You seem very heatbroken writing this. It has a lot of angry but thats why I love it. So much emotions. I like it!!!! Hope to see more in the future!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Through With It

    thanxx, like i said, it's an old poem. now im back to my happy mode. im glad you both liked it

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