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    Through my eyes.

    A Glimpse of the world
    Through my eyes.

    Ignored by all,
    The passer by's

    A head full of dreams.
    A broken heart.

    Guess there's still some left,
    To rip apart.

    The world is staring.
    They hate what they see.

    But I can not change it.
    Because it is me.

    Even people I care for.
    They make me feel low.

    Still everyday,
    its home I must go.

    To put on a smile.
    Be a provider.

    Hope my children won't care,
    That Mom has no one beside her.

    Though, Im hurting inside,
    Still I must give them a home.

    Inside and outside.
    Im always alone.
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    Re: Through my eyes.

    The rhymes add a very nice charm to this poem. ^_^
    Although it doesn't complement the mood and atmosphere this poem should portray.

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    Re: Through my eyes.

    Oh wow
    That was very emotional and it chnged my mood in a second.
    Wow I love it, and yeah

    the rhymeing was great.
    Kepp it up.

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    Re: Through my eyes.

    If I could have just one wish,
    I would wish to wake up everyday
    to the sound of your breath on my neck,
    the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
    the touch of your fingers on my skin,
    and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
    Knowing that I could never find that feeling
    with anyone other than you.
    There is only one happiness in life,
    to love and to: be loved.

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    Re: Through my eyes.

    i like this poem and it speaks to me on so many levels....
    you'll never guess that i felt like that at one time by the way i act but it's true.. I love it and i can't wait to see more form you.

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    Re: Through my eyes.

    Well thanks for the feedback. It makes me feel less alone to know someone can relate. But at the someime, I wouldn't wish the feeling I have (sometimes) on my worst enemy.
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