Colors of blue,
Shades of gray,
All darkens within the day,
Covering all as though a hue,
Streaks of yellow,
The heavens bellow,
Rain starts pouring,
Thunder still roaring,
Creating a wall,
A wall that is both week and strong,
Droplets that beats and weaves the song,
The song of sorrow, agony, and pain,
Tempting the world to go insane
please give me your criticism.
:2thumbs:This is extremely good:2thumbs: It is very descriptive and uses good imagery, I find it hard to write thees kind of poems personally.