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Jul 01, 2009, 02:23 PM
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 | Till The End I love you till the end You love me like a friend I want you to be mine But one of us is taken all the time I'm a horrible person But you're an angel to me Even though you dont agree I may not be around like a bestfriend should, But I'd do anything I could just to be with you My love for you is very true My baby I just want to be with you So dont forget me, please remember me till the end of time Because in my heart you will ALWAYS & FOREVER be mine And when I die,my love for you will always be alive And if you dont feel the same, our friendship will FOREVER remain  Last edited by Leslie the forgotten; Jul 02, 2009 at 07:19 PM. |
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Jul 01, 2009, 07:51 PM
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| Re: Till The End This is excellent. The idea of love living on long after the person is actually expired is a great theme. I myself am writing something similiar to that. |
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Jul 01, 2009, 08:06 PM
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Jul 02, 2009, 02:12 AM
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| Re: Till The End Nice poem... This poem actually saying to me like love will remain for eternity even one's dead... Good theme... WOW and having a nice theme and then the poem fits together is getting me exicited.... I like this poem much 6^_^6
__________________ I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying.... I loved my GF...  |
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