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    Till The End

    I love you till the end
    You love me like a friend
    I want you to be mine
    But one of us is taken all the time
    I'm a horrible person
    But you're an angel to me
    Even though you dont agree
    I may not be around like a bestfriend should,
    But I'd do anything I could just to be with you

    My love for you is very true
    My baby I just want to be with you
    So dont forget me, please remember me till the end of time
    Because in my heart you will
    ALWAYS & FOREVER
    be mine
    And when I die,my love for you will always be alive

    And if you dont feel the same, our friendship
    will FOREVER remain


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    Re: Till The End

    This is excellent. The idea of love living on long after the person is actually expired is a great theme. I myself am writing something similiar to that.

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    Re: Till The End

    Quote Originally Posted by beast View Post
    This is excellent. The idea of love living on long after the person is actually expired is a great theme. I myself am writing something similiar to that.
    thank you so much. i look forward to reading yours (:

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    Re: Till The End

    Nice poem...
    This poem actually saying to me like love will remain for eternity even one's dead...
    Good theme...
    WOW and having a nice theme and then the poem fits together is getting me exicited....
    I like this poem much 6^_^6
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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