time is short time is grand dont you wish time was in your hand
time to die time to live please tell me what time it is
time to create time to destroy all things are times toys
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time is short time is grand dont you wish time was in your hand
time to die time to live please tell me what time it is
time to create time to destroy all things are times toys
Ooooh I like this... this is a really awesome short! you should do a whole series of shorts! yeah!
Time....just like anything else in life time has two sides of the coin as you described in your poem. We can use time in a good way or in a bad way, I myself have used it in a bad way....but a good thing about it is there is still time left to maybe change....there is ALWAYS still time left, always.Quote:
Originally Posted by awesomeparty12
I like it!!! It's short, but makes an impact to the reader. This is a great peice of work. Keep it up.
:laugh: this poem made me laugh^^ it was really good
I love it....>>>Quote:
time is short time is grand dont you wish time was in your hand
time to die time to live please tell me what time it is
time to create time to destroy all things are times toys
your right about time awesome...>>>
Time is short....>>
You can`t make time go back[unless you have time machine to go back.]
I Like the way you expressed time....>>
It waaaaaaaaas.....>>
Soooooooo AWESOME!!!!
that is a really good poem. love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that's really good honey. keep it up. ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^