LinkBack URL
About LinkBacks
Reply With Quoteawesomeparty12 (Mar 09, 2009)
You packed a lot into just 3 lines. And even did a ryme scheme. Well done. Not every poem has to have meter and ryme but if you can get it I say go for it, and that is difficult with only 3 lines. Was this meant to be like a Sijo?
awesomeparty12 (Mar 09, 2009)
Great poem.
Wish you would have had a more versatile layout, though.
And the last line, could you explain it? I don't quite understand the 'times toys' bit.
awesomeparty12 (Mar 09, 2009)
Posting Permissions
Bookmarks