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    Time alone

    Dedicated...well I think everyone knows...for you Tanja


    When you left me --
    I stayed here --
    the whole time, I just stayed --
    I stayed and cried --

    I cried cos' you --
    the one I truly loved --
    left me without saying --
    anything...not even a single word --
    not even that small word "goodbye" --

    Every second you are away --
    away from me --
    I think, why did you leave --
    You left me without a word --
    or was all that a word --
    a word...farewell --

    And if you come back --
    you'll know that --
    there's always someone --
    who'll wait for you --

    If you ask, why I'm crying --
    I can say that I missed --
    you ask "what ?" --
    And I'll say "everything" --
    And I'll say, I can't live without you --
    even for this time --
    And you'll look at me and say --
    "I was away for 10 minutes"


    Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...

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    Re: Time alone

    That poem makes me cry it seems so sad but I like it I really do keep it up...Sniff...
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    Re: Time alone

    it feels kool to be alone doesn't it! nice poem, keep it up.

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    Re: Time alone

    Nope...it s*cks beeing alone. Well atleast like person in poem.


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    Re: Time alone

    You are a man...you walk like a man...you pose like a man...but you write like a butterfly Joel, .

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Time alone

    Quote Originally Posted by pigtaru
    You are a man...you walk like a man...you pose like a man...but you write like a butterfly Joel, .
    Lol piggy...maybe it's result of these things:

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    =POEMS!!


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    Re: Time alone

    I love the twist you used in the poem at the end! I wasn't expecting that!

    Favuorite part -

    And if you come back --
    you'll know that --
    there's always someone --
    who'll wait for you --
    Its so sweet!

    You are a perfect speller too! Unlike me >.<

    You have such a way with poetry Mr.Butterfly, keep writing!

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: Time alone

    Quote Originally Posted by Hold.Me.X.Thrill.Me
    You are a perfect speller too! Unlike me >.<
    ROFL, sry but I'm just about worst speller in Finland.
    Well not exatly but Shonen would still have gotten greats laughs from this...

    Thanks for comments, I really appreciate that people like my poems


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