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    Re: Time alone

    Let me start first by saying it was an excellent poem.
    And after about 3 times rereading it I can get a strong picture of what you are saying.
    So you are desperatly waiting for this girl and when she reterns she is still welcome in your heart! yes I win!! !!

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    Re: Time alone

    i tot i've posted here b4 but...
    well, i think it was bit funny at the end

    And you'll look at me and say --
    "I was away for 10 minutes"
    anyways..it shows that u care and live for that person like your heart and soul juz to miss that person when she was 10 mins away frm u. O_O
    tis is a first with this particular style, honestly i wouldnt say that it's a very nc one, but i guess it's ok. (im being extremely honest here)
    all in all, great work

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