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    Time and Change

    I don't know if its good so please comment lol

    These times have change
    Old day's never last
    It's just so strange
    Thing's happen so fast

    Old day's are gone
    But we never forget
    Our day's go on
    Old memory's are always it

    The time's we always remember
    How we made this land
    This country live's forever
    America will alway's stand

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    Re: Time and Change

    Nice flow wording hell knight. It was a pretty cool peom, i really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up man.

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    Re: Time and Change

    I am getting the impression that you are a patriotic person hellknight.It reminds me of soldiers that fight for their countries in the past and even the present.Anyway,i liked the rhyme and your choice of simple words which is maintained throughout the poem.thumbs up.

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    Yes, the flow was very nice. And normally I'd make a comment about punctuation? But your poem pulled it off without needing any.
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    Re: Time and Change

    thanks guy's i appreciate the comments and all, lol

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    Re: Time and Change

    I really enjoyed reading it Hellknight. It says everything it needs to. Even though things change you will always have the memories of them right?
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    Re: Time and Change

    Quote Originally Posted by Ky-lyrra View Post
    I really enjoyed reading it Hellknight. It says everything it needs to. Even though things change you will always have the memories of them right?
    your right, its something that memories can't be forgotten but things changed alot lol

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    Re: Time and Change

    It's a great way to show your words. I love reading them just make sure to keep up your work and I can't wait to read the next one.
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