Thread: Time of dieing

sO i finally got over my writer''s block and i wrote a poem ^_^ , and the titles time of dieing , coz its like talking bout the last second before dieing so...and i felt like putting it up X) .I tried making it in to shorter sentences but failed to do so hope its good lol x)


Evaporate away , O regretful soul! -to the zenith of heaven
And let thyself be carried to the skies by the Raven

Curl up amongst the closeby clouds and let them creep
towards you to cover up the wounds that run deep

Let thy crimson burdened blood spill , and redden the sky
while the sinking sun scorches thy heart so dry

And the magnolian moon will gleam the ashes of your soul
while the whispering wind caries them away with the touch of a ghoul

pS The raven is supposed to be the angel of death , i used some kind of symbolism that i cant explain XP

So do u like it ?