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    Time locked in the sand.

    Today is like every other day here, HOT. The sand blowing in the wind stings my eyes, and invades everything. I think I have cleaned my gun three times today. There is nowhere to hide from it, it hunts us, giving us no peace, it's in our food, our water, our clothes, not even in our sleep can we escape it; and we have come to hate it as though it as an enemy taking aim.

    To some it is a constant reminder that we do not belong here, and for others it is the path to paved for liberty, but all I see is sand. It just blows and swirls, but nothing ever changes. And sometimes though, I can see home, the people, and things I loved out on the harizion, and then they fade. The sand takes from you, everything you once were and when you have nothing left to give it takes more.

    You try to think that your the same, but your just fooling youself. The look in the eyes of those around you tells a sad truth that can't behiden anymore.
    We will always be here, in this place, this hell; even when we have left and everything is forgotten, we will still be here. Hating the sand.

    I think the sand is getting to me again, and I'm ranting now. Sorry about that I will just go and clean my gun.


    For my brothers, sisters and myself who will remember the the sands.
    MAY YOU DAY BE BRIGHT, AND YOUR ASSOCATION WITH MORONS BE MINIMAL. EXTRA MEDICATION FOR ALL!!!

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    Re: Time locked in the sand.

    well I might not be your brothers or sisters but that was really good

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    Re: Time locked in the sand.

    that was pretty kool man. keep it up.

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    Re: Time locked in the sand.

    I think you write this words in the sand, for you to forget the past that minds you of someone.....

    Good, hope to see some more improvements..... 8/10

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