Time, Love and Faith Some question the fact
Of why did they love?
Were they the two birds
Known as one dove?
Funny how the two end up...
...Playing the game called 'Love each Other'
The aim and the game are simple,
But it just gets harder and harder
The beginning starts with kisses and trust,
But as moment passes,
One wants the lust
Time passes and it's the usual routine,
The kisses, their existence
And questions like "Hey, How are you? How have you been?"
One feels glad and gets the pleasure,
The other gives for what is known to them is 'treasure'
Both had haunted for lust
As the game went in its sequence
But how wrong they are,
Here the challenge begins!
Lies and secrets
meet them in their path,
Without knowing, One lets go from the others hand
Life and truth
May have been their friends or foes,
But the destiny demands them,
To walk further on the new path they have chose.
Secrets are revealed,
The truth shines over the lie
Both cross each other
And begin to question each other...
...With the well known question that begins with 'Why?'
For the main deal is here,
and the test of their trust,
Or was love to them
Like a sudden winds gust?
Is this what you had called love?
It came and it went,
Or was it a beautiful aroma
With an unforgettable scent?
The love that had never actually went afar,
We fought and trusted one and other together,
But both alone had played the game of Love and War.
Now I sit up and wonder,
Feeling my heart frost,
Hating the results...
...Of the game I have lost.
Me: *No...Comment from me*
-x- Zainab -x-
"One feels glad and gets the pleasure,
The other gives for what is known to them is 'treasure'"
ooh.. @.@heehe...
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a very very good poem... I like this very much... ^^ nicely written and the flow of it was awesome... rhymes..dont ask.. it was very nice..
The poem started nice then the plotting twists... wow... nicely done... @.@ it was a very good poem... i like it very much.. ^^
You should write more..Keep up the good work~! ^^ enjoyed it very much
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Wow, in my opinion, this poem shows how you or the person feels about love after their own foolishness and / or the concequenses of "falling" in love, since love, or the "game" gets "harder and harder", because love requires heaps of work, in general terms.
Very nice colours and attractive, too! :3
Re: Time, Love and Faith Thanks Ray,
It will be awhile since I post another...
Oh..the treasure line
Thanx for the comment though.
-x- Zainab -x-
That is such a terrific poem. Simply amazing. The content is full of meanings and it just captures the mood really well. Good job and keep up the awesome work. =D
Thanks Rave... yeah *sighs* Harder and harder....everytime -.-Originally Posted by Rave_Grip
I'll try....That is such a terrific poem. Simply amazing. The content is full of meanings and it just captures the mood really well. Good job and keep up the awesome work. =DUsually I'm not really good at writing this kinda stuff...but I try.
Thanxyou~
Ahh, come on, Love is easy, all we think is what makes the difference, this is also shown by this particular line: -
One feels glad and gets the pleasure,
The other gives for what is known to them is 'treasure'
Bet you didn't notice that!
Re: Time, Love and Faith Ummm >>>.>>> I did....
But I ignored it. Yet Ray And you reminded again -.- lol
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