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    Some question the fact
    Of why did they love?
    Were they the two birds
    Known as one dove?

    Funny how the two end up...
    ...Playing the game called 'Love each Other'
    The aim and the game are simple,
    But it just gets harder and harder

    The beginning starts with kisses and trust,
    But as moment passes,
    One wants the lust

    Time passes and it's the usual routine,
    The kisses, their existence
    And questions like "Hey, How are you? How have you been?"

    One feels glad and gets the pleasure,
    The other gives for what is known to them is 'treasure'

    Both had haunted for lust
    As the game went in its sequence
    But how wrong they are,
    Here the challenge begins!

    Lies and secrets
    meet them in their path,
    Without knowing, One lets go from the others hand

    Life and truth
    May have been their friends or foes,
    But the destiny demands them,
    To walk further on the new path they have chose.

    Secrets are revealed,
    The truth shines over the lie
    Both cross each other
    And begin to question each other...
    ...With the well known question that begins with 'Why?'

    For the main deal is here,
    and the test of their trust,
    Or was love to them
    Like a sudden winds gust?

    Is this what you had called love?
    It came and it went,
    Or was it a beautiful aroma
    With an unforgettable scent?

    The love that had never actually went afar,
    We fought and trusted one and other together,
    But both alone had played the game of Love and War.

    Now I sit up and wonder,
    Feeling my heart frost,
    Hating the results...
    ...Of the game I have lost.

    Me: *No...Comment from me*

    -x- Zainab -x-

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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    "One feels glad and gets the pleasure,
    The other gives for what is known to them is 'treasure'"

    ooh.. @.@ heehe...

    WONDERFUL !

    a very very good poem... I like this very much... ^^ nicely written and the flow of it was awesome... rhymes..dont ask.. it was very nice..

    The poem started nice then the plotting twists... wow... nicely done... @.@ it was a very good poem... i like it very much.. ^^

    You should write more.. Keep up the good work~! ^^ enjoyed it very much

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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    Wow, in my opinion, this poem shows how you or the person feels about love after their own foolishness and / or the concequenses of "falling" in love, since love, or the "game" gets "harder and harder", because love requires heaps of work, in general terms.

    Very nice colours and attractive, too! :3

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    Thanks Ray,

    It will be awhile since I post another...

    Oh..the treasure line yeah.

    Thanx for the comment though.



    -x- Zainab -x-

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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    That is such a terrific poem. Simply amazing. The content is full of meanings and it just captures the mood really well. Good job and keep up the awesome work. =D

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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    Wow, in my opinion, this poem shows how you or the person feels about love after their own foolishness and / or the concequenses of "falling" in love, since love, or the "game" gets "harder and harder", because love requires heaps of work, in general terms.

    Very nice colours and attractive, too! :3
    Thanks Rave... yeah *sighs* Harder and harder....everytime -.-

    thanks...for your comment ^-^

    That is such a terrific poem. Simply amazing. The content is full of meanings and it just captures the mood really well. Good job and keep up the awesome work. =D
    I'll try.... Usually I'm not really good at writing this kinda stuff...but I try.

    Thanxyou~

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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    Ahh, come on, Love is easy, all we think is what makes the difference, this is also shown by this particular line: -

    One feels glad and gets the pleasure,
    The other gives for what is known to them is 'treasure'


    Bet you didn't notice that!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    Ahh, come on, Love is easy, all we think is what makes the difference, this is also shown by this particular line: -

    One feels glad and gets the pleasure,
    The other gives for what is known to them is 'treasure'


    Bet you didn't notice that!
    Ummm >>>.>>> I did....

    But I ignored it. Yet Ray And you reminded again -.- lol

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