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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    AHh, so that particular paragraph really did take plac
    Hmm, -ahem-

    Also if you want to write a long poem like this again, refrain yourself from repeating minor points / feelings, unless they play a part.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    AHh, so that particular paragraph really did take plac
    Hmm, -ahem-

    Also if you want to write a long poem like this again, refrain yourself from repeating minor points / feelings, unless they play a part.
    I dunno what gave me the idea to actually write this *cough*Lie*cough*

    I never actually planned to write this into a long poem, I usualy suck at long poems....I can tell.


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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    Lol ravey...dont be so hard on her.. this is a very good poem.. sheesh

    but it's a good suggestion there by ravey ^^ and i bet you'll do better next time ^^

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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Lol ravey...dont be so hard on her.. this is a very good poem.. sheesh

    but it's a good suggestion there by ravey ^^ and i bet you'll do better next time ^^
    Why Yes Rave ...Don't be hard on me....I'm just an innocent child ...an angel to be exact

    Thanx for the suggestion,

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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    Hmmm... it has something in it... I enjoyed reading this and I really do like how you write and at last I've come to find something about you (and about your username, without looking in the "username" thread)...

    The great thing in this is that you've told a story here... a really great story of complicated relationships... that's not easy to do ^^

    A nice work here and I really hope to see more ^^ Cheers!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Hmmm... it has something in it... I enjoyed reading this and I really do like how you write and at last I've come to find something about you (and about your username, without looking in the "username" thread)...

    The great thing in this is that you've told a story here... a really great story of complicated relationships... that's not easy to do ^^

    A nice work here and I really hope to see more ^^ Cheers!
    Thanx Lasura, I thought quite alot about this poem...I sort of wanted to say this to someone -.- But anyway...Thanx for your support.

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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    This is a excellent poem that you had written... I can see how you displayed the innocence of love & the deceptive ways of it also... That is very true in the game of love it can be so kind, but also so harsh... < Keep up the good work >

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    Re: Time, Love and Faith

    Quote Originally Posted by Clorox View Post
    This is a excellent poem that you had written... I can see how you displayed the innocence of love & the deceptive ways of it also... That is very true in the game of love it can be so kind, but also so harsh... < Keep up the good work >
    Thanx Clorox, You know...What you just thought...I was thinking the same thing while writing this poem.

    I will keep it up ^^ Thanx for your support

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