Thread: Time, Love and Faith

Originally Posted by Rave_Grip

AHh, so that particular paragraph really did take plac
Hmm, -ahem-

Also if you want to write a long poem like this again, refrain yourself from repeating minor points / feelings, unless they play a part.

I dunno what gave me the idea to actually write this *cough*Lie*cough*

I never actually planned to write this into a long poem, I usualy suck at long poems....I can tell.

Lol ravey...dont be so hard on her.. this is a very good poem.. sheesh

but it's a good suggestion there by ravey ^^ and i bet you'll do better next time ^^

Originally Posted by RayMe

Lol ravey...dont be so hard on her.. this is a very good poem.. sheesh

but it's a good suggestion there by ravey ^^ and i bet you'll do better next time ^^

Why Yes Rave ...Don't be hard on me....I'm just an innocent child ...an angel to be exact

Thanx for the suggestion,

Hmmm... it has something in it... I enjoyed reading this and I really do like how you write and at last I've come to find something about you (and about your username, without looking in the "username" thread)...

The great thing in this is that you've told a story here... a really great story of complicated relationships... that's not easy to do ^^

A nice work here and I really hope to see more ^^ Cheers!

Originally Posted by Lasura

Hmmm... it has something in it... I enjoyed reading this and I really do like how you write and at last I've come to find something about you (and about your username, without looking in the "username" thread)...

The great thing in this is that you've told a story here... a really great story of complicated relationships... that's not easy to do ^^

A nice work here and I really hope to see more ^^ Cheers!

Thanx Lasura, I thought quite alot about this poem...I sort of wanted to say this to someone -.- But anyway...Thanx for your support.

My username? Yes...I guess It's true.

This is a excellent poem that you had written... I can see how you displayed the innocence of love & the deceptive ways of it also... That is very true in the game of love it can be so kind, but also so harsh... < Keep up the good work >

Originally Posted by Clorox

This is a excellent poem that you had written... I can see how you displayed the innocence of love & the deceptive ways of it also... That is very true in the game of love it can be so kind, but also so harsh... < Keep up the good work >

Thanx Clorox, You know...What you just thought...I was thinking the same thing while writing this poem.

I will keep it up ^^ Thanx for your support

-x- Zainab -x-