Title

Shu · Dec 07, 2006, 12:33 PM

And my heart hangs from this noose,
Like your footsteps in crowded rooms,
Filled with sweet scents of autum blooms,
Is this what you imagine?

Catch a glimpse of her empty stare,
Hidden eyes behind her auburn hair,
Catch my breath for the smoke to clear,
And its just as it should be

*anime_being_god* · Dec 07, 2006, 01:35 PM

great poem, its short and sweet , and has lots of feeling in it.

Dec 07, 2006, 12:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
Shu Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 562 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 633	Title And my heart hangs from this noose, Like your footsteps in crowded rooms, Filled with sweet scents of autum blooms, Is this what you imagine? Catch a glimpse of her empty stare, Hidden eyes behind her auburn hair, Catch my breath for the smoke to clear, And its just as it should be
Status: Offline

Dec 07, 2006, 01:35 PM	#2 (permalink)
anime_being_god AO Rebel Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Ohio Posts: 1,715 Thanks: 16 Thanked 24 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 5,302	Re: Title great poem, its short and sweet , and has lots of feeling in it. __________________
Status: Offline

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

Similar Threads
Thread	Thread Starter	Forum	Replies	Last Post
no title	FLawEdmiNd	Poems	1	Nov 24, 2006 06:12 AM
no title	fayt lingod	Poems	5	Oct 22, 2006 04:29 PM
No Title	HieisLove	Library	2	Sep 20, 2006 09:21 PM
No title (sorry)	Blade X	Poems	4	Sep 20, 2006 07:39 PM
No Title	HieisLove	Poems	5	Sep 20, 2006 07:02 PM

Welcome to AnimeOnline.net, your personal Anime Community!	Anime Online Rulez!