title suggestions any one?

You want to know what I'm thinking
All I can think of is you
You want to know how I'm feeling
When I'm happy or blue

I think of your eyes
The way that you laugh
I look past your problems
And hope they don't last

I don't care what you're wearing
If your hair is up or down
Sometimes I try to impress you
And look like a clown

I wanted to tell you I loved you
In a special sort of way
The words I had chosen
I forgot what to say

Days go by I can't be with you
And I'm starting to fiend
I get to hold you and kiss you
At night when I dream

This feeling is frightening
It scares me a lot
I tried to resist it
But I'd rather be shot

Now I have to be honest
With both you and I
That it won't always be easy
We both have to try

I don't want to be hurt
I don't want to leave you
I don't know if you love me
As much as I want you to

I've fallen in deeper
Than I ever thought I would
I want you forever
Much more than I should

It's a lot to imagine
It's a lot to take in
If my love is a burden
To have it is sin

But if I had just one anything
And that's all I'd need
I want you to be happy
As happy as can be.






Any feed back would be great.

I propose this title: "Deserted subway station"

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Originally Posted by Hassun

I propose this title: "Deserted subway station"

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why deserted subway station? what warrants a subway?

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Originally Posted by Foreverinyourarms

i think it should be called "my secret feelings i want you to know" but anyways its a lovely poem i like it alot!!

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I like that title
and thank you for enjoying it I will try to keep bringing out new ones but most of my poems follow the same course.

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Originally Posted by yuudai

why deserted subway station? what warrants a subway?

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Absolutely nothing. Why? Does it have to?