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    My secret feelings I want you to know

    You want to know what I'm thinking
    All I can think of is you
    You want to know how I'm feeling
    When I'm happy or blue

    I think of your eyes
    The way that you laugh
    I look past your problems
    And hope they don't last

    I don't care what you're wearing
    If your hair is up or down
    Sometimes I try to impress you
    And look like a clown

    I wanted to tell you I loved you
    In a special sort of way
    The words I had chosen
    I forgot what to say

    Days go by I can't be with you
    And I'm starting to fiend
    I get to hold you and kiss you
    At night when I dream

    This feeling is frightening
    It scares me a lot
    I tried to resist it
    But I'd rather be shot

    Now I have to be honest
    With both you and I
    That it won't always be easy
    We both have to try

    I don't want to be hurt
    I don't want to leave you
    I don't know if you love me
    As much as I want you to

    I've fallen in deeper
    Than I ever thought I would
    I want you forever
    Much more than I should

    It's a lot to imagine
    It's a lot to take in
    If my love is a burden
    To have it is sin

    But if I had just one anything
    And that's all I'd need
    I want you to be happy
    As happy as can be.






    Any feed back would be great.
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    Re: title suggestions any one?

    I propose this title: "Deserted subway station"

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    Re: title suggestions any one?

    Quote Originally Posted by Hassun View Post
    I propose this title: "Deserted subway station"
    why deserted subway station? what warrants a subway?

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    Re: title suggestions any one?

    Quote Originally Posted by Foreverinyourarms View Post
    i think it should be called "my secret feelings i want you to know" but anyways its a lovely poem i like it alot!!
    I like that title
    and thank you for enjoying it I will try to keep bringing out new ones but most of my poems follow the same course.
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    Re: title suggestions any one?

    Quote Originally Posted by yuudai View Post
    why deserted subway station? what warrants a subway?
    Absolutely nothing. Why? Does it have to?

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