I want to look at the worst of life, and still consider it awesome.
Recognize my blessings, before I have to say I lost 'em.
I know I'm not your cup of tea... ..That's why the door is shut.
But I don't want to hurt because I didn't make the cut.
My love for you is delicate.... As if it were hand made.
But you just rip it all away, quick, like a band-aid.
I don't want to cry right now. Or write a whiny poem.
But whatever I can do, I'll do... to make you feel at home.
... Not Ever Again...
"My love for you is delicate.... As if it were hand made."
I liked this line the best. It makes me think of lace and ...ice (don't ask why I have NO idea.)
I liked this but towards the end it seemed.....as if you no longer wanted to write but wanted to finish this none the less.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
loveing someone and putting your faith in someone and a lot of trust and the poem says it all i like that and thats what i get from this poem. even though some people do tend to betray the trust or fragile love you may offer its still there and waiting for the right hand to light clasp it and embrace it in to there heart.
really awesome poem peach
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Hi
Falling in love is a Great Feeling.....But in the same time it is Painful
that what Days Taught me & also I kind of understand That from you
the way you wrote it show that your feeling is strong & a little sad
Your secret is your prisoner, if you let it out you become his prisoner
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