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    Today is Perfect!

    The wind lightly blows across
    his face as the people go on there
    Mary way , he looks at the chirping birds
    and laughs a bit ..i love you.

    Through his eyes he See's people
    that suffer and scream and torment
    and want to end there suffering by
    smothering there screams with blood .

    he gets up and walks down a paved walkway
    going to who knows where people walk by him
    and think to them selves *what a nice guy
    he looks to be friendly* the sun over head the day
    is perfect.

    Voices speak to him as he grits his teeth under a fake smile
    so no one will know that he wants to walk about killing all
    the pretty things that are around him , a blackened sky, a sun
    that turns from bright yellow to dark red as the blood smothers
    the sun.

    children walk by as though nothing is wrong and they
    even ask if he want so play catch , he nods with out
    saying a word and walks away from them as they Cary on in a
    safe world where everything is fine.

    He look in horror as the children have blood coming from there
    head pouring down there faces he hold back a scream of horror
    as he walks quickly by them pretending he dosnt see them , this
    damned horrific day seems so nightmarish why want this agaony end?

    Yes today is beutifull and the wind just lightly blows across his
    cheek as he wak on and everything seems perfect to them
    and everyone thinks he is fine , the world is perfect and he is
    quiet the good man as every one see's him walk on think his thoughts.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Today is Perfect!

    This started off so nice to end up being so dark. I really liked it cause it described how some people might look sweet and innocent on the outside while they are so mean and cruel on the inside. Great job on this one sweetie.
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    O.o very, veeery interesting... I liked it sooo much.. it... explains a lot of things, the feelings of a very weird man, it's great how you opened my eyes to a totaly different world, a world from the view of this man, it was really interesting... You've done a great work.
    I'm looking forward for more! ^^

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    Re: Today is Perfect!

    agree with lasura and cherry.. it is nicely done.. love how the poem goes.. ^^

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    Re: Today is Perfect!

    This is my new favorite of yours. A beautiful. perfect day.... And still the demented walks. Everyone is happy, so they see happiness in him... But all he sees is darkness and red.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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