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    Re: Together Forever

    Quote Originally Posted by halo3master View Post
    i loved it the mistakes let me no you didnt copy rhis poem from soneelse and the fact you were tired and still wrote something this good shows you really have talent great work kuwi

    Really!!!! Then thank you!!!! (Hugs) Thank so much! And no i didn't copy it! So no worries on that! If I did then let me jump off a building RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!
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    Re: Together Forever

    It's a good theme and the emotion behind the poem is great! As posted in this thread the wording is a little rocky, but with time it will become easier! Keep up the good work and you are on your way! I'll be watching for more of you work here on AO!

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    Re: Together Forever

    Quote Originally Posted by BlueFox1 View Post
    It's a good theme and the emotion behind the poem is great! As posted in this thread the wording is a little rocky, but with time it will become easier! Keep up the good work and you are on your way! I'll be watching for more of you work here on AO!
    Yes sir!!!! I will do my best!!!!!! And thank you so much as well so yah!!! (Claps)
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