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    Tolerant Angels

    Well I said I wanted to get back to collaborations. And in that spirit Zev suggested I use a comment I made about every racist I insult. I told her I think and angel gets another feather.

    Sand can cut and polish mighty stone,
    As hate can poison straight to the bone.
    It also wears on heroines of ours,
    For they wait for a change in fate,
    A world that learns to tolerate.
    But fire eyes still glow gazing at the stars.

    One day will I see ignorance end?
    What keeps me going through this weather,
    Is knowing with each racist I offend,
    Somewhere an angel gets a feather.



    This is a reaction to messeges from racist that sadly enough even exist no sites about foreign pop culture. Many of which had plenty to say about inter ethnic relationships.

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    I'm glad you took my advice and wrote about it! Turned out to be a great little poem.

    Signature is a Gwenibe original.

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    WE did a good job Zev, thank you. Collaborations always produce the most interesting poems.

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    This is wonderful. I can feel your point and the imagry is astonishing. The poem paints a interesting picture.
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