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    Tomorrow

    Tomorrow is never guaranteed
    why put off something u do tomorrow that you can do today.
    you may come find yourself no longer apart of earth tomarrow.
    Live your life to fulliest you can.
    Dont be afraid of the future
    as future for you may be 6 feet under.
    Dont get mad becuase you cant carry you anger to your next life.
    stand out from the people that for wait Fridays or Saterdays.
    as everyday you have may be your last.

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    Re: Tomorrow

    A few spelling errors. And this sounds like a bunch of quotes strewn together..
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    Re: Tomorrow

    I must agree with Kasai- there seem to be lots of quotes in this... but not like it's a bad thing... I was thinking about writting something alike... but then it asks to be longer- if you're talking about quotes than your words have to somewhow overpower the words of others...

    Anyways I'm glad to see you writing again and I'll be really waiting forward for more, k? ^^

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    Re: Tomorrow

    thanks you guys i didnt think it was all that short. and one of peach poems sparked this poem saying that 1000 tomrrows kinda had me thinking and this is that that thinking

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