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Reply With QuoteSO MUCH EMOTION TO IT!!!!!!! I FEEL LIKE CRYING FOR SOME REASON BUT IT WAS just so GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!! Lovely poem and just so unique!!! I hope to see more!!!!
I'm sorry.
I can't keep my feelings on a tied down.
Just because In them I drown.
I shouldn't pull you to the ground.
I claim, that I would give you the world.
Love that never goes away.
Make everyday a sunny day.
Yet I rain sorrow.
I can't even give you a happy tomorrow.
And tomorrow is yours.
To hell with my heart
and the pain it endures.
I should be runnin' my pockets.
But my pockets are dry.
I shouldn't be a dark cloud.
I should paint you the sky.
But I.
I have nothing to give, just this stormy weather.
But wait!
I heard when 2 people break someone,
it brings them close together.
Tomorrow you'll have peace.
I'll see to it my words are unspoken.
Tomorrow you'll have the one that you're close to.
And I'll stay quietly broken.
... Not Ever Again...
SO MUCH EMOTION TO IT!!!!!!! I FEEL LIKE CRYING FOR SOME REASON BUT IT WAS just so GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!! Lovely poem and just so unique!!! I hope to see more!!!!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Wow so do I so very sad*crys*so much emotion! Very nice hope to see more!^^
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"Because it's okay to hide your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)
very awesome poem and the silent love is sometimes
hard to live with but some belive its worth it , i belive its
a load of bull if they can take your love loud ,in your face
non stop then they dont deserve the love you offer.
love is to fragile to be letting it go to waist quietly and thats
the truth , anyway i loved the poem and this poem does speak
on how things can be if you let them be that way but its wrong
to hold back how you feel for there sake be true to yourself.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
You may wanna start fine tuning you psychic abilities. because I'm pretty sure you have some. After I wrote this I had a relentless urge to make every cry my heart had.... heard. And I did. At the time I thought my goal was to get him to see, to think, maybe even to appreciate me.Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice
But almost immidiatly after I pored my heart out. I realized a piece of what you just said above. That, Silently admiring does no good. And loudly proclaiming my love, wont do any good either.
I feel like I've been working for an employer, who I respect greatly... but he has little regaurd for me. And though Ive been at that same site for MANY years.... When a promotion is offered, it went to somone far less qualified.
I'm finally realizing, I need to quit. Just like many employers want hard workers. Someone out there would really appreciate my love.
... Not Ever Again...
lol ok then i wll do that and fine tune my ability
and thats the right thing to do if you keep being
overlooked , i mean why let your love go to waist on
someone who does not apreciate it.
just like a boss you know? if you give 100% ad he wants
more then move on becuase he dosnt apreciate what you do
offer which is something really awesome
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
You're right,(as always)... thank you.
Letting go is bitter sweet. Theres this indescribable pain. A panic, Like Im about to walk down an unlit busy street, at night. Facing toward traffic, and none of the vehicles have headlights.
I guess I just have to have faith that something bigger than me will get me through it. And that there will be something good for me around the corner.
... Not Ever Again...
Oh... a very nice, quite sad poem. I love the ending, I love the way you say it, I love what you say- give up on something, break up just to make him happy- I know that feeling.. You've managed to put that into words that at first I was quite speechless...
Really a nice work... I'll be waiting forward for more!
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