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    Re: Tonight

    Love the poem WW! By the way I'm going to use that as your new nickname! But back to the poem it's awesome it really presents an image of these things happening in my mind! I know I did a couple of these things when I was younger! lol! Keep up the great work!

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    Thank you Blue-fox for your support. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and were able to picture all those things happening. And the nick name is fine with me.

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    Re: Tonight

    Nice, Short, Good, the three special letters NSG, lol If I say that in one of your poems then you know, I like the last version, it has a little humor in it, well to me anyway, keep it up and hope to read more of your work.

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    Re: Tonight

    Such true words. Tho I found a typo in it -
    Tonight is a deception of an unkown tomorrow;
    Just a stumble in ur perfect poem XD Nice job. I can't say anything else. All your works are great! I feel like a failure ._.

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    Re: Tonight

    Nice, short, straight to the point. I like the rhuming and imagery! ^_^

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    Thank you all for your comments! I hope for you to know that they do inspire me to write more. Elie-chan, thank you for pointing that out to me! I will fix it right away.

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